Riffing Time

Ha, I didn't know the miko was such a baka!

Well, so there I was. My hair was short, raven-black and spiky, my eyes glowed a dangerous and unsettling green. I wore a raven-black shirt with some green-glowing lines on it´s front, and the green lines formed a green-glowing flame on my back. Also, I wore darkblue jeans with green lines on the side, non-glowing this time. My shoes were also black, black sneakers with crimson lines to be exact. My skin was pale, incredibly pale. And there was that small green flame that flew next to my head...

Do you hear that girls? That's my Mary Sue alarm. I suppose it works for Marty Stus too.

"Surprised much?" I flinched and saw Reimus reflection in the door behind mine, meaning that she stands behind me. "Who am I, Reimu...? What am I...?", I asked. Reimu sighed. "I don´t know much. Look, you´ll stay here with me in the shrine until I know if you´re a dangerous youkai or not. I mean, somebody has to know you! And then, we care about your name and such."

So the door's a mirror too now?

I hissed and rolled my eyes. "Fine." "Good, now make yourself some use and sweep the front!" I flinched. It was now that I saw the broom in Reimus hands. "Lazy Miko.", I hissed under my breath. Last thing I saw was a vein on Reimus forehead.

That's an amazing reaction to being given a place to stay until you can find something out about your identity.

But if you killed him, wouldn't he just respawn?

So I can keep flirting after everyone else is gone, Pachu-chan? Can I do anything else?

-grin-

Anyway, I'm having fun with this crappy fic!

I-I meant you too! And we don't do anything here. Let's just get on with this, please...

I growled. There was this small oni that had been introduced to me as Suika. She stood in front of me, pointing at my face while laughing madly, while I swept the front of the shrine. "You have a red line across your face!", slurred Suika. "Damn that Miko and her accuracy at throwing brooms...", I growled under my breath.

I'm noticing that characters tend to repeat a lot of actions within paragraphs, I noticed.

Well, he's certainly full of something...

Suika, however, seemed not to care and kept on laughing at me instead. I growled louder at that. And then, suddenly, there was a loud crash from the back of the shrine. Of course, Suika and I quickly ran towards the source of the noise, only to find a small shed. Throwing the door open, we found Reimu buried under a pile of paper. We sweatdropped.

What is it that she didn't care about? Your comment on Hakurei-san's talent for throwing brooms?