Riffing Time
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Greetings readers, I'm joined today by several...guests I suppose you'd call them. You're all familiar with Kirisame-san. Then there's Hakurei Reimu-san, Shameimaru Aya-san and Cirno. Let's just get this over with...
Since there are so many people commenting on the story today, we'll just skip this author's introductory essa-
And then there is something I probably gonna soon hear many reviews about, saying that my OC is overpowered, once you read of his ability... I admit, it really sounds overpowered, but once you read the circumstances you may realise that he is not. I promise, I wrote him so that he is not really overpowered... I hope so, at least. Anyways, he starts off pretty weak, but will grow stronger...
This is going to be unpleasant.
CLONK! I ripped my eyes open and cursed loudly in pain. "Stupid pavement, why the fuck are you so haaaard?", I screamed at the poor, innocent stone ground. I stood up and began to stomp on it. "Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!", I screamed at the top of my lungs. Poor ground. Suddenly, I heard a loud noise, a sliding door being ripped open, almost falling out of its hinges.
He ripped his eyes open? How does that happen?
Currently Reading:What else? A terrible story.
Greetings readers, I'm joined today by several...guests I suppose you'd call them. You're all familiar with Kirisame-san. Then there's Hakurei Reimu-san, Shameimaru Aya-san and Cirno. Let's just get this over with...
Since there are so many people commenting on the story today, we'll just skip this author's introductory essa-
And then there is something I probably gonna soon hear many reviews about, saying that my OC is overpowered, once you read of his ability... I admit, it really sounds overpowered, but once you read the circumstances you may realise that he is not. I promise, I wrote him so that he is not really overpowered... I hope so, at least. Anyways, he starts off pretty weak, but will grow stronger...
This is going to be unpleasant.
Chapter 1: Memories of the past are long gone ~ It starts with a faceplant
CLONK! I ripped my eyes open and cursed loudly in pain. "Stupid pavement, why the fuck are you so haaaard?", I screamed at the poor, innocent stone ground. I stood up and began to stomp on it. "Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!", I screamed at the top of my lungs. Poor ground. Suddenly, I heard a loud noise, a sliding door being ripped open, almost falling out of its hinges.
He ripped his eyes open? How does that happen?
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Hey, look on the bright side Pachu-chan! Maybe this means he'll die of blood-loss right off the bat.
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Why take your anger out on the poor innocent pavement when there are perfectly good youkai you can go beat up.
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Yeah! Kick the ground's ass!
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Beating up youkai is your solution for everything, Reimu-san. Still, this guy headbutts pavement.. so he must be even more hard-headed than you are. Ayayaya.
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Hakurei-san's anger issues aside, shall we continue?
"Would you kindly stop to dishonor holy ground, you damn youkai!" I flinched and looked at the red and white miko that stood angrily in the door to her shrine. I blinked. Shrine? I turned around and saw a Shinto gate. "I´m at a shrine?", I asked, frowning. "Obviously.", snarled the miko as she came over to me. I narrowed my eyes. "Why am I at a shrine?", I asked.
You asked him to stop and dishonor your shrine? Surely getting treatment for his eye injuries is more important.
"Would you kindly stop to dishonor holy ground, you damn youkai!" I flinched and looked at the red and white miko that stood angrily in the door to her shrine. I blinked. Shrine? I turned around and saw a Shinto gate. "I´m at a shrine?", I asked, frowning. "Obviously.", snarled the miko as she came over to me. I narrowed my eyes. "Why am I at a shrine?", I asked.
You asked him to stop and dishonor your shrine? Surely getting treatment for his eye injuries is more important.
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Wow, his apostrophes look completely different from any apostrophe I've ever seen! So amazing!
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Depends on if that damn youkai made a donation or not. Though, if he's dishonoring my shrine, he better put more than 300 yen in my donation box!
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Watch the snarling there, Reimu-san. You're going to start foaming at the mouth, clawing after his change like that.
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Unfortunately for you, Rei-chan, he doesn't look like he's smart enough to figure out how to use a donation box. Or see it, 'cause his eyes are ripped open and all.
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That obviously pissed the miko off. "Why should I know? I was just drinking my tea when there was this huge earthquake and then you were dishonoring my holy ground!", she shouted and next second, I had her gohei on my head. And hell, it hurts!
So the earthquake wasn't worth investigating, but someone calling the ground stupid is?
So the earthquake wasn't worth investigating, but someone calling the ground stupid is?
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I didn't know gohei burned on contact! I mean, since you clear didn't hit him.
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A mysterious earthquake? Wow, this story is so suspenseful!
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Ayayaya. Since when do you care about the shrine's floor so much anyway, Reimu? I thought the only thing holy to you was money..
You really should invest in flaming gohei, either way.
You really should invest in flaming gohei, either way.
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"What was that for!", I screamed as I clutched my head. "For cursing a holy place! Be happy I didn´t exterminate you, Youkai!" I flinched. "You..kai? I am a Youkai?", I asked. The shrine maiden frowned. "What? You don´t know what you are?", she muttered. I nodded. "Uh... I have a more important question...", I smiled uneasily, "...who the hell am I?"
You're really protective of your floor in this, aren't you Hakurei-san?
You're really protective of your floor in this, aren't you Hakurei-san?
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Pachu-chan, that's cause she does dirty, dirty things on that floor and doesn't want anybody to find out.
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Mhm. I have photographic evidence. You should see some of the crazy stuff her and Alice-san do. Alice-san is surprisingly flexible.. ayayaya...
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Marisa, give me three good reasons why I shouldn't murder you for that remark....
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Fantasy Se-!
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Fantasy Se-!
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What kind of things?
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Not in here Hakurei-san. You don't want to know how expensive the books you'll be replacing are.
Cirno, you'll find out when you're older...perhaps.
Cirno, you'll find out when you're older...perhaps.
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Thank you.
"So you´re telling me the last thing you remember is that you hit your head on my pavement?", asked the shrine maiden that had introduced herself as Reimu Hakurei. I nodded. "And you don´t know your name?" I nodded again. "Weird.", said Reimu eventually with a casual expression. "Whaaaat?", I shouted. "I said you´re weird. It´s obvious that you are a youkai. Damn it, you have green-glowing eyes and that weird, green-glowing flame hovering over your shoulder!", she exclaimed.
He's surprised? Did he think waking up on the steps of a shrine with no memory was a normal thing?
"So you´re telling me the last thing you remember is that you hit your head on my pavement?", asked the shrine maiden that had introduced herself as Reimu Hakurei. I nodded. "And you don´t know your name?" I nodded again. "Weird.", said Reimu eventually with a casual expression. "Whaaaat?", I shouted. "I said you´re weird. It´s obvious that you are a youkai. Damn it, you have green-glowing eyes and that weird, green-glowing flame hovering over your shoulder!", she exclaimed.
He's surprised? Did he think waking up on the steps of a shrine with no memory was a normal thing?
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Generic amnesia plot, activate!
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Green and glowing? He doesn't sound like a Youkai.. he sounds like he has radiation posioning.
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Maybe his eyes are glowing cause he's about to shoot lasers!
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"W-What?", I asked confused. "Yeah. Go on, there is a thing I bought from Rinnosuke in the next room that´s called 'mirror' or something. You can see yourself in it, but don´t ask me how it works.", she said. I nodded and walked over to a door. I opened it and entered, immeadiatly noticing the thing on the far wall that did indeed reflect me. That stupid miko doesn´t know how it works... hehe. But´s that just a normal mirror, it reflects light...
How did he not notice the flame floating over his shoulder, or the fact that everything's probably tinged green.
How did he not notice the flame floating over his shoulder, or the fact that everything's probably tinged green.
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